The only word I can use to describe this novella is juvenile. Honestly? It reads like a pre-teen boy’s wet dream. This isn’t an excerpt from the novel, just an example of what it’s like:
I wanted him to fuck me. He slid his hot cock into my wet pussy. It was wonderful.
I threw up in my mouth a little bit just writing that. I don’t know how the author of this short story collection managed to keep her dinner down…
Speaking of which… I actually had my doubts that the author actually IS a woman. Seriously. I have never – in my whole life – heard a single woman say “I love to suck cock!” – much less say it the four or five times she does in this novella.
Also, to call her an author is an over-statement. There was only just enough story to lead into the sex and nothing besides. Am I asking too much of written porn? Maybe I am – but what I want is an excellent fucking story (pardon the pun) with some nasty sex. Please? Anyone…?
Needless to say, there was nothing hot about these bedtime stories and I most definitely will NOT be looking for the next volume.